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Is it Poetry or Is it Verse — Part 2

Is it Poetry or Is it Verse? — Part 2

Is it Poetry or Is it Verse — Part 2

2.

Efforts to define the difference between poetry and verse (like efforts to define the difference between poetry and prose) have been with us for a long time. Verse is often a term of disparagement in the poetry world, used to dismiss the work of people who want to write poetry but don’t know how. Verse in this usage means unsophisticated or poorly written poetry. But quality of writing is not the real difference between the two. Yes, there is plenty of poorly written verse out there, but there is also plenty of poorly written poetry — and sometimes the verse is the better crafted.

There are strange things done in the midnight sun
By the men who moil for gold;
The Arctic trails have their secret tales
That would make your blood run cold;
The Northern Lights have seen queer sights,
But the queerest they ever did see
Was that night on the marge of Lake Lebarge
I cremated Sam McGee.

“The Cremation of Sam McGee,” with no help from the critical establishment, is still going strong after a century, while most early Yeats is read today only because it was written by Yeats. To use “verse” as a pejorative term, then, is to lose the use of it as a true distinction.

George Orwell gives us another way to think about this when he describes Kipling as “a good bad poet.”

A good bad poem is a graceful monument to the obvious. It records in memorable form — for verse is a mnemonic device, among other things — some emotion which very nearly every human being can share.

Into this same pot Orwell puts “The Charge of the Light Brigade,” the work of Bret Harte — and presumably “The Cremation of Sam McGee.” “There is a great deal of good bad poetry in English,” says Orwell; by implication there is even more bad bad poetry. My own nominations to the latter include the work of Edgar Guest, whose Collected Poems, in a signed limp leather edition, was one of two books of poetry in the house where I grew up (a wedding present to my parents).

Ma has a dandy little book that’s full of narrow slips,
An’ when she wants to pay a bill a page from it she rips;
She just writes in the dollars and the cents and signs her name
An’ that’s as good as money, though it doesn’t look the same.

Orwell’s distinction, between good bad poetry and just plain bad poetry, is one based on quality of execution, of craftsmanship. Good bad poetry is verse competently — even memorably — written. But his distinction leaves unaddressed the nature of the poem itself.

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Is it Poetry or Is it Verse? — Part 1

Is it Poetry or Is it Verse? — Part 1

Is it Poetry or Is it Verse? — Part 1

1.

Question: What do the following poems have in common?

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It seemed to me a simple thing since my socks was showin’ through:
Turn my old boots out to pasture, and buy a pair — brand new.
Well, they built this cowboy K-mart outa town there in the Mall,
Where I parked my Studdybaker after shippin’ drys this fall.

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There R no words 2 express
how much I truly care
So many times I fantasize of
feelings we can share
My heart has never known
the Joy u bring 2 me
As if GOD knew what I wanted
and made u a reality

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My brother built a robot
that does not exactly work,
as soon as it was finished,
it began to go berserk,
its eyes grew incandescent
and its nose appeared to gleam,
it bellowed unbenignly
and its ears emitted steam.

Answer: They are the opening lines of poems by leading writers in their respective fields. And they all, most likely, set on edge the teeth of the readers of Poetry magazine.

It’s not just snobbery. People who care about their poetry often experience genuine feelings of embarrassment — even revulsion, when confronted with cowboy poetry, rap and hip hop, and children’s poetry not written by “adult” poets. Their readerly sensibilities are offended. (If the writing gives them any pleasure, it is a guilty pleasure.) The fact that Wallace McRae, Tupac Shakur and Jack Prelutsky all wrote these for large, devoted audiences simply adds insult to the injury. Somewhat defensively, the serious poetry crowd dismisses such work as verse, not poetry, and generally acts so as to avoid it if at all possible in the future. The fact that these different kinds of poetry don’t communicate, don’t do business with one another is not just a matter of lost email addresses. The advocates of each know what they like, and it’s definitely not what the others are doing. The result is a poetry world of broad divides, a balkanized system of poetries with their own sovereign audiences, prizes and heroes. The only thing they share is the word poetry, and that not willingly.

There’s nothing wrong with this, a generally peaceful co-existence of live-and-let-live poetry communities, except to those who require, for intellectual comfort, a universal theory of poetry that ties it all altogether. It also matters to the Poetry Foundation and organizations like it, who must make choices and use their finite resources to support some kinds of poetry while not others.

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Importance of being wrong part 2

The Importance of Being Wrong — Part 2

Importance of being wrong part 2

What fascinates me about Aristotle, in his writings on natural science, is the wonderful mistakes he made. He asserted that men have more teeth than women. In those days before the scientific method he did not bother, presumably, to ask his wife to open her mouth and take a count. (Or perhaps he did but Pythias had lost a few.) He asserted that if two objects of unequal weight are dropped, the heavy one will fall faster than the light one — a notion so obvious that for the next 2,000 years no one questioned it until Galileo climbed that leaning tower in Pisa and dropped two balls of different weights. They fell together.

In all our endeavors, the arts and sciences as well as the daily business of living, we need to stop thinking of error as failure. Mutation carries that negative connotation of failure (albino mammals and two-headed babies are mutants). But mutation is not a mistake. Without it there would be no variation, and without variety there would be nothing for natural selection to operate on, no pathway by which a species can survive through its fittest variants.

Pronouncements of what works and what does not work in poetry, judgments of good art and bad are of course the business of the community of critics: academics, reviewers, your readers, your peers. The folks who just reviewed your manuscript. Of this group Yeats spoke for many a writer when he published “The Scholars” in 1915.

Bald heads forgetful of their sins,
Old, learned, respectable bald heads
Edit and annotate the lines
That young men, tossing on their beds,
Rhymed out in love’s depair
To flatter beauty’s ignorant ear.

All shuffle there, all cough in ink;
All wear the carpet with their shoes;
All know what other people think;
All know the man their neighbor knows.
Lord, what would they say
Did their Catullus walk that way?

“Wrong” is related to “risk.” Artists today understand so well the taking of risk that their distinction comes in spotting it first, not taking it first. To see it is to take it. But no one wants to be in error, to be “wrong.” Daring is good, failure is bad. Except that failure is good, too. Any good poet knows, in writing a poem, that to play it safe is to be dead on arrival.

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The Importance of Being Wrong — Part 1

Poetry’s main chance, it seems to me, the best of its possible futures, lies in not being buffaloed.

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You have just returned from a workshop in which your poems, the manuscript of a first book, were the subject of discussion. It was a summit meeting of eyeglasses, cleared throats, and nodded assents. One of your associates called the work “a visit to the secret corners of the lesser earth,” and congratulated you on “your ability to import unhappiness from the farthest quarters.” Another, however, noted “a predominance of pedantry.” Yet another dismissed it as “a lot of tranquil gossip.” Your advisor, however, was enthusiastic. The poems put him in mind of “the latest trends in barbiturates.” Taken as a whole “they perfect the poem as an artistic fly-by.” He commended you on the logical order of your manuscript, which was put together “in a way that hog callers can understand.” Back home, you must now consider what to do with this advice and who, after all, is to be the authority on what you write.

Poetry’s main chance, it seems to me, the best of its possible futures, lies in not being buffaloed. There are so many who would tell us what to do, who would keep us on the short leash of their disapproval. The problem, to borrow a line on Aristotle, is to get the better of the misologists and eristics. There is a part of us that will not be owned. It is that part which the poet must recognize, accommodate, nurture.

Poetry needs to be incorrect. It needs to use the wrong fork. It needs to live in harm’s way. (Poems are not harmless.) It accosts us on the streets. It offers to wash our windshields. It has criminal instincts and should be ranked with shoplifting and other petty crime. Are poets crazy? At least they are in touch with craziness. I think of the figure of the poet as a man or woman in a dump, holding a broken lamp — a white porcelain fracture of the made. I think of poets as standing in a rest room staring into the opposing mirrors; their business is this parliament of images. Imagination, starting where understanding stops, goes where understanding has not been and cannot go.

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How Should a Poem End?

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A narrative poem, whether an epic as long as the Odyssey or an ancient ballad like Sir Patrick Spens, has a tale to tell. And when the tale is told, it stops. The progress of a lyric poem is quite different. Robert Frost describes it memorably in “The Figure a Poem Makes.”

Like a piece of ice on a hot stove the poem must ride on its own melting. A poem may be worked on once it is in being, but may not be worried into being. Its most precious quality will remain its having run itself and carried away the poet with it. Read it a hundred times: It will forever keep its freshness as a metal keeps its fragrance. It can never lose its sense of a meaning that once unfolded by surprise as it went.

And he says of such a poem:

It has denoument. It has an outcome that though unforeseen was predestined from the first image of the first mood. It is but a trick poem and no poem at all if the best of it was thought of first and saved for the last. It finds its own name as it goes and discovers the best waiting for it in some final phrase. No tears in the writer, no tears in the reader. No surprise for the writer, no surprise for the reader.

It is of that surprise I want to speak, and how that surprise can engage its reader in a partnership. In “Meeting the British” Paul Muldoon (himself a great admirer of Frost) describes a meeting between a Native American and British soldiers who have come to suppress tribal uprisings during Pontiac’s War (1763).

Meeting the British

We met the British in the dead of winter.
The sky was lavender

and the snow lavender-blue.
I could hear, far below,

the sound of two streams coming together
(both were frozen over)

and, no less strange,
myself calling out in French

across that forest-
clearing. Neither General Jeffrey Amherst

nor Colonel Henry Bouquet
could stomach our willow-tobacco.

As for the unusual
scent when the Colonel shook out his hand-

kerchief: C’est la lavande,
une fleur mauve comme le ciel.

They gave us six fishhooks
and two blankets embroidered with smallpox.

See how the poem keeps on going after the surprise in that last line? The poem is finished but the reader’s mind must continue beyond that line to realize the British intent and to watch a dark world open. The reader has become a participant — a partner — in the work of the poem. And it is that personal engagement, when the reader is no longer reading but enters the poem as a participant, that will stick in the reader’s mind, perhaps forever.

I call this a Wiley Coyote ending. Wiley races after the Roadrunner to the edge of the cliff — and keeps on going. After running several steps on thin air he halts, looks at us, looks down, and plummets. The last line of a lyric poem should carry us beyond the poem’s end to plummet into thin air.

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The Reader Completes the Poem

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Recently I realized that when a poet has finished writing a poem, the poem is still not complete. The poem’s act of completion is when someone else reads it. And so I wrote this poem.

The Book

There is no Frigate like a Book
to take us Lands away.
Emily Dickinson

I find you in these sunless stacks.
Your poems might be uncommonly fine —
but your pages darken to brittleness
and you’ve never been checked out. Unless
your anchor’s weighed and you proceed
to find the harbor of another’s mind,
nothing will come of the cargo in your hold.
I stand in the gloom of the unread, and read.

A reader brings a poem to life. Without readers a poem cannot be more than an act of self expression. Poetry is about communication. Billy Joel once said that when he goes on tour (he was speaking about his legendary 1987 tour in the USSR), performing his songs makes them live again — not just for his audience but for himself as well. It’s the same for a poem. When I learn that someone has read one of my poems, I go back and read it again. Strange as this may sound, the poem carries fresh energy, it’s more alive to me because of that reader.

Every poem implies its audience, and the intended readers are not always the same. When Melville wrote, “Call me Ishmael”; when Whitman wrote, “I celebrate myself, and what I assume you shall assume”; when Frost, in the first poem of his first book, said, “You come too”; when Baudelaire wrote, “Hypocrite lecteur, — mon semblable, — mon frère!”; each was addressing a reader but not the same reader. Wouldn’t it be great if we could ask these poets to describe who in their imagination was sitting across the table, listening as they wrote? Who were they writing to — and for? Each of these writers seemed to make transforming assumptions about his readers and address them in a new way. Their direct address was somehow made more direct. It held, succeeded and literature was changed.

P.S. I’ll be writing in a future post about the role of rhyme in a formal poem. But “The Book” is a good example of what I call “customized rhyme.” By that I mean, instead of a standardized rhyme scheme — such as a quatrain or limerick which serves to “package” the poem — the customized rhyme scheme illustrates and supports the argument the poem is making. The rhymes in “The Book” are: abaa/cbcc. The first b (“fine”) has to wait for its mate (“mind”) until the poem’s journey has succeeded.

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The Permanence of Poetry

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They may be the oldest books in your library, having come down from your mother or father or a favorite aunt. They are different from the Stephen King paperbacks, the Danielle Steel romances, the flotsam and jetsam of books from past elections. Bound in limp leather and printed on the best paper, they may be inscribed for a graduation or wedding. If, in the age of Kindle, the shelves in your library come to be empty save for a single, plastic e-book, then the books I’m talking about will be the most likely to remain in their place of honor on your shelves.

Why is it, when we want to make a gift in fellowship, love or celebration, that the single gift we choose to make is so often a book of poetry? I think it’s because poetry’s great pursuit is permanence. The work of the poet is to make poems that will last forever, in a world where nothing lasts forever. And this the poet does by making a poem that is perfect within its own four corners. The occasion of the poem, its actual subject, may be the slightest thing.

Whenas in silks my Julia goes
Then, then (methinks) how sweetly flows
That liquefaction of her clothes.

Next, when I cast mine eyes and see
That brave vibration each way free;
Oh how that glittering taketh me.

We still read these lines, 350 years after they were published, because Robert Herrick captured a moment, like a fly in amber, with the arresting perfection of which art is capable.

But there is a further reason, beyond its accomplishment as art, that poetry can be imperishable. Poetry deals in human emotion and human wisdom. This kind of knowledge doesn’t change or become outmoded with time, because human nature is a constant throughout the history of our kind. Not so with scientific knowledge. Ptolemy was supplanted by Copernicus; Newton by Einstein. But the love that shook Shakespeare in the sonnets is the same love we feel today. Ditto for the anger of Achilles or the knowledge of death in Emily Dickinson. Once said, and said with the perfection of their art, the great poets speak for all of us who follow.

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What is a Poem?

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Welcome, and thanks for stopping by. These occasional short essays, of which this is the first, hope to show that poetry is that rare place in contemporary experience where legitimate magic can still happen.

So, what is a poem? Allow me to riff. It arises out of the ordinary, out of the gravitation in whose haul we daily live. It seeks out and consumes the otherness in matter, for in all poetry there is an otherness. A poem can be angry — pugnacious, mean-spirited (call it the vinegar proxy). It can also be an affirmation, an expression of love through fresh perception, a descant on the world.

A poem is a pursuit of local perfection, as unrelenting as a telephone number in its need to be exact. But if it merely records, even with exquisite sensitivity, it is no more than camera film. A poem is a report from deep in the mind: a report on the human condition, a profit and loss statement of the spirit. Like a bill of lading, it documents a cargo and its journey, which is the slow migration of a soul.

The poem and its subject are like the random alliance of an acorn and the ground on which it falls. Wherever it looks, the poem gathers the earth into its hands. It grows like Aristotle’s definition of a riddle: “a song in crooked words beyond intelligence.”

A poem is a celebration, like a turbulence of cut flowers. A poem is a village breathing by its own set of rules. A poem exists in its tension like the Hindenburg: a hydrogen bubble waiting to see if it finds its self in flame.

A poem is like a mariner’s compass, swinging
with slow recoveries until,
to the pull of a distant absolute
responding, the knowledge in its atoms,
overshooting each time less — lightly
but persistently on this one point —
settles on what it true.

Then in three degrees of freedom
it points the way. Coins and watches,
our rolls and recoveries
do not dispel its equilibrium.
Housed in a binnacle, lit from below,
its amber radiance includes the helmsman’s face.

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